You know, I have had my book read and edited at least 6 times. This does not include the most recent edit for the re-release by MKSP. It annoys me to no end when someone jumps on the “bad grammar and misspellings” train. My book has been edited. Multiple times. I don’t care if you are a retired typographer or proofreader. I’ve had a proofreader go through my book. I’m seriously annoyed. If you wonder why my book is written in short sentences and intentional fragments, my target audience is ages 11 – 16+. Just putting that out there also.